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A Streetcar marked 'Apathy' ( Act 2, Ch 1 )

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Once again the collar has outlived the dog, once again Holder539 opens a DA post with a Scarce-quote. Cut me some slack though for I have just fulfilled my promise from the 'Featured Deviation' tab! Here it is - the anticipated fourth chapter and official opening of the second act of 'The Body in the Void', the soon to be sci-fi horror classic nobody knows about yet because it isn't even finished. Right of the bat I can tell you the fifth chapter is in the making and it is going to be awesome! Right of the bat I can also tell however that it is going to take some time - the semester's end is approaching swiftly and with it finals are looming on the horizon. Looking at the workload college is dumping on me at the moment I somewhat feel like a Spartan - not in terms of fighting spirit mind you, it's just that every time I look at my notes I want to throw them off a cliff... enough of the ramblings though, the chapter  is about 23 pages so you'll have enough to read. Oh and before any question arise about the locations described in the book:

DISCLAIMER: All locations described in 'The Body in the Void' are purely fictional. Neither Fort Bixley or Hobbes' Mill exist nor the county around them  ( to my knowledge the  state of Maine as well as the USA are real though ) 

UPDATE: This document is the second draft of this chapter of 'The Body in the Void'. Since the novel
                   is an ongoing one, there will be cases in which plot-details will be changed  over time,
                   either when errors are found in prove-reading or when I, while writing further chapter
                   find ways to improve the overall literary product ( e.g. in this case because I decided to
                   introduce a bunch of characters in a different order then originally intended for a greater
                   dramatic effect and a more natural sense of 'Oh, so this person knows this person and
                    they in turn know a person C' ) For simplicity sake the changed passages and date of
                   update are indicated below,

Update: 17.09.2018 - Spell-checking and some minor stylistic changes.

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